"I hate magic but i'll give you a magic tome because i'm sure you the mc can't use magic, haha that'd be silly!"

I think i know where this is heading :P

Sad prolouge... Very adorable opening! ^^  Ok I will admit that is hot, but too soon?  It not even been established as to his orientation?  Second on that is that if he did that, it wouldn't make sense that he has no idea of his orientation?  You would not insulate something if the other shows disgust or revulsion to it!  Jeez he could do with explaining the concerns away more!  Some of the interactions feel a little sudden and forced, no build up to make them seem natural.  Also little "shard", not "wolf" or "pup"? What is the significance as to why that term is used?  Yay other species! Even if its only a simple CG! :3 Nevermind he has a sprite! :D Next one there is at least one Cameo around here somewhere! XD  Really? A magic tome from a powerful individual being sold so freely? Isn't that dangerous? Can Dusan even use magic?  Then the reaction is so sudden and off putting, like they never talked about this before?  It makes the whole thing feel really dumb?  Tavern... more cameos!  What the heck? He is only looking to ask a simple question! Why is he paying for it?  This isn't some shady deal he is making!  And ugg even worse this sudden rough up situation?  Doesn't strike me as normal considering the way the guards acted, they can't be everywhere at once, but wouldn't they know these incidents take place?  Oh nevermind, there is the answer!  Hehe oddly enough it felt right to go for the potion!  Now it hurts! XD YIKES! Wasn't Expecting horror!  He certainly knows how to be promiscuous without overdoing it!  Calamity??? Wolf eating fish... (SALMON! <3, I woof love fwish!) Oh TWO daddies? XP  Ah! Now this is the backstory pieces I was missing and looking fur!

Would be curious to eventually know if there were any other survivors of the attack on his village, something to think and decide upon for a future chapter(s).

The visuals seem decent, least fur now! :3

I doubt you will need it, but am another who is great with ideas, basing it off of what I already know of the VN.  Whether you use it, some of it, or none is up to you.